Seyi commented on the post, A Greater Testimony
I only have problems with the title. It’s a misnomer.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Fatherland
I’ll say this piece of yours is more about WHAT WE WANT than WHAT WE ARE at the present time. Believe me, you don’t need microscopes to see that!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, For The Broken Hearted
@ohmston, Do you have her address? Forward mine to me. I believe it’s, ” To each his own.” Second time I understand poetry. Most time it’s just mumbo jumbo to me. KEEP WRITING!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, A Greater Testimony
@banky, I wouldn’t want to share the compliments for your brain child, which is what would happen if I supplied an apt title. KEEP WRITING!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, A Greater Testimony
Believe me, you wouldn’t find it funny when the catchy caption I suggest suddenly makes me the focal point and upstages you. Are u still laughing!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Twice the Toothsie : Musings of A Reprieved Man
You’re very welcome!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Love after Death
Sorry, but you need to move on. The major errors have been addressed, although I still see plenty of places where punctuation marks are omitted. KEEP WRITING!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, An Agonizing Sentence
It was really agonizing, but there doesn’t appear to be anything more to it.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Fatherland
Most of the good qualities you stated are not really present in Nigeria at the moment.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Leadership Torch by Ifeanyi Enoch Onuoha
Noted! There are tons of books addressing the issue of Leadership in the market, what makes this particular book outstanding or at least as good as any of the many others?
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, congratulations to @chikaunigwe for winning the...
@dira, you never grow up like this?
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, congratulations to @chikaunigwe for winning the...
Congrats to the sis I don’t know.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Call for entries: Commonwealth Short Story Prize
Us? Only one african!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, HYSTERIA...A Memoir
Good narration. … as silent as A BREEZE ______ ought to be BREEZE. Uncountable nouns do not take the indefinite articles.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Danfo Semantics - “The Cause and The Curse”
There are too many direct speeches in this narrative without inverted commas. KEEP WRITING!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, December Featured Writer Howyoudey - Writing my...
“Rasta Writer” is a more descriptive handle.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Finding Hubby – Episode 8
Na season film? I guess I’ll have to make this episode my first season. KEEP WRITING!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, The day Jonah became a fish!
I got the comic relief. Good narration. However, I notice that you didn’t capitalize the initial letters of proper nouns; there’s nothing like “deeper life” or “set theory;” they ought to be “Deeper...
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, WAITING (im)PATIENTLY
A thought-provoking piece. Keep it up. KEEP WRITING!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, If It Quacks Like A Duck
Problem identified! What solutions are there?
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Love Defined
Too busy to read nowadays; I only read the first couple of lines and skimmed through the rest. Tasting with other people’s tongue, I’d say KEEP WRITING!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Finding Hubby – Episode 9
I have read it too. Comments reserved!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Finding Hubby – Episode 10
Did you stick to your hunky bi or jilt him? WATCH OUT FOR EPISODE 11!!!!!!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Thoughts on Nigerian Writing and Literature
I dunno what makes ‘The Lion and the Jewel’ outstanding besides the accolades of the writer; yet, it used to be a compulsory piece for literature students in secondary schools.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Mickey Jay: Memoirs Of A Lagos Playboy (I)
The following day….
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, The First Time I Did It!
Sorry for your loss! Good narrative.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Finding Hubby – Episode 17
It’s becoming Nollywood style! Take the Nolly out of the Wood: it’s bad for business!! KEEP WRITING!!!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Finding Hubby – Episode 18
You’re very right. The narration looks flat.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Finding Hubby – Episode 20
Want to know what happened next? Watch out for episode 21! Now showing at Silver Bird Cinemas!!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Finding Hubby – Episode 21
What happens next? What came over Oyin Clegggg? What is wrong with Hawt Pastor? WATCH OUT FOR EPISODE…..NEXT!!!!!
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Our Angels 11
I only read the first paragraph. Effect this spelling error on the first line: “… going to LOOSE her” ought to be LOSE.
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Why Our ‘pastors’ Are Disgracing Us
Good observations you made here, but you didn’t proffer any solution. We all know how steeply morality is getting eroded by the second in this part of the world, the highlight of your write up ought to...
View ArticleSeyi commented on the post, Expensive Joke
Bland narration: no artfulness at all. Write more and get better!
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